How Do You Put Text In A Novel

In our Fiction+ series, we set out to assistance CMOS users adapt Chicago manner to creative writing contexts. Sometimes, Chicago's full general guidelines already work just fine; other times, they demand a little noodge to sit comfortably on a page of fiction. And often, as is the case in this post, they are simply one option among many that may suit the material.

And so my aim today isn't to make up one's mind the best style to format text messages in fiction, merely to show how unlike stylings suit different kinds of work and to betoken out problems that might arise.

The Chicago Way

CMOS makes no special recommendation for formatting text messages in formal writing, more or less taking for granted that they will be treated the same as other quotations, either inside quotation marks in line with the main text or set up off as a block. This is standard exercise for academic books and manufactures, reports, and other kinds of no-nonsense nonfiction:

In one notorious scam, the manager texted the horses' names the day earlier the race in lodge of win, place, and show: "greenish fancy, dollop, stand past me."

The same treatment can be used in a novel, but considering quotation marks are strongly associated with spoken words, text messages in fiction are ofttimes styled in italics or bold or a different font, whether run-in or set off as a block:

When her telephone finally chirped, the text was brusk: Joe's at ten?

Conversation Complications

Dorsum-and-forth messages between two or more texters present more of a challenge. Short and infrequent exchanges, or those where the delivery medium is incidental, may only be integrated into the narrative with activeness beats:

I texted Why that ane? and Greta'south reply was instant: It was her fave. It figures. Mom was weird that manner.

Conversations set up off as a block tin mimic the display of mobile apps past using staggered indent levels that position outgoing texts farther to the right than incoming texts:

Why that one? I thought bluish
was out of the running.

Yeah, simply this was her
favorite.

Nevertheless, without special treatment, and especially with group texts, readers can lose track of who's texting, and (self-pubbers, listen up) if the staggered formatting is lost during publication, it volition go out a mess. Writing out the speakers' names can clarify who says what, but it's clunky, similar a transcript:

(Me) Why that one? I thought blue was out of the running.
(Greta) Yeah, but this was her favorite.
(Maggie) Go alee. I'll pay.

Better solutions are called for. And they exist!

Again, with Feeling

For many writers and readers, text messages formatted plainly in the line of narrative fail to convey the feeling of a text. Afterward all, unlike emails, letters, and voice messages, texts are sudden, tiny "events." They have their ain kind of immediacy and intimacy, popping upwardly in a cord of colorful bubbling and accompanied past someone's face or initials and urgent fiddling dings or whistles. Ordinary formatting tin give them a flatness, a lack of urgency.

What'southward more, a text-only block of a grouping-texted chat can't approach the clarity provided by the familiar syntax of a narrow column of messages staggered left and right that distinguishes each texter by color or name or headshot.

The special qualities of text messages take obviously occurred to makers of films or TV series who choose to return messages on the screen instead of showing viewers a shot of the graphic symbol'south telephone.

Display choices range from the literal,

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to the personal and quirky,

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to the cool and elegant.

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Graphics every bit Narrative, Non Illustration

Why shouldn't the makers of books have the same choices when they display a text? Over the last decades, "hybrid" or "multimodal" novels that feature graphic elements forth with conventional pages of text have conditioned readers of all ages to have and even await a narrative to consist of more straight lines of text.

By now we're used to reading all kinds of materials through a graphical interface (in social media, blogs, and messaging apps). No ane is surprised to run across drawings, handwriting fonts, mucilaginous notes, photos, or collages integrated into their reading—not equally illustrations, but as integral, chronological parts of the narrative. Unlike illustrations, these graphics require precise positioning in relation to the rest of the text.

Text letters within a story are similarly office of its narrative, and like any other visual chemical element, they benefit from formatting that conveys their distinctive appearance or syntax. In printed books and e-books and online fiction, text messages tin be formatted with diverse techniques using color and shading or special graphics. Whole novels—for case, the latest young adult books by Lauren Myracle and the TBH series by Lisa Greenwald—have been formed primarily of texts and emails, featuring page afterward folio of messages.

Potential Pitfalls

These extremes aside, anyone wishing to integrate text letters into a fiction narrative in a visually hitting and coherent way must weigh the benefits against the drawbacks. For instance, the utilize of color in printed books can exist prohibitively expensive. And almost any kind of realistic or distinctive visual display volition date your work, which may be platonic for historical fiction, but not for a story y'all mean to stay contemporary as long as possible.

Best Practices

When displaying text messages in works of fiction, there are a few givens. If images are taken from actual mobile devices, these details will take care of themselves. (Apps for creating fictional mobile text conversations are useful for this purpose.) But if other kinds of media are used to generate the appearance of text letters, creators must pay attending to the conventions for message display. As of this writing, texts invariably feature

• Left justification (ragged-correct edge) for individual texts
• Staggered left and correct bubbling to indicate incoming and outgoing messages, respectively
• App-dependent fonts, colors, date and time stamps, usernames or headshots or avatars, etc., consistently rendered

Questions to ask when deciding how to display text messages:

• Are there many texts and is space an upshot?
• Are there only single texts, or are there also conversations?
• How many people text at once, and is identifying each texter of import?
• On the continuum from no-frills quoting to full-color decorated balloons, what are the likely preferences or expectations of your primary audience?
• If color is ideal but likewise expensive, can shading work as a substitute?
• Do yous require historical accuracy or a longer shelf life for the depicted technology?
• If your work goes into audio, how will the reader handle the texts?

If yous demand help, a professional book designer can provide solutions to adjust your genre, audience, and publishing budget. A graphic designer will also know how to make the renderings more or less futurity-proof.

Images

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Detail of however from The Fault in Our Stars (directed by Josh Boone), in "Everything Incorrect with The Fault in Our Stars," CinemaSins, Oct 7, 2014, YouTube.

Detail of still from Sherlock, season 1, episode 1, "A Study in Pink," directed by Paul McGuigan, series created by Steven Moffat and Mark Gatiss, aired Oct 24, 2010 (U.s.), 0:12:28, Netflix.

Cover of Lisa Greenwald'southward TBH, This Is So Awkward: A Novel in Text, TBH no. 1 (New York: Katherine Tegen Books, 2018).

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